Friday, March 12, 2010

Feedback for the first assignment

Thats the feedback for my first assignment. It doesn't clearly say I am bad but does make suggestions which would mean that I need improvement. I did read 'well written', 'descriptive' and 'interesting' at different intervals but it does not pep me up completely. But I am glad the arrival of this atleast gave me something to blog about!


6 comments:

Unknown said...

I shud have been yue tutor ! :P lol :D though I am not anywhere near those experienced ppl yu are being mentored by.......... but I cud give yu the most basic advise that she gave !!!! hahahah... but again that wud never happen you see....as I am not a patient and hence I cannot read too much.....FU CK I am full of excuses .....

neways congrats on yur first step and wishh yu all the best !

Unknown said...

* as patient as I may seem (that is If I ever :P )

Anonymous said...

i would aree with the lady...but well like her too...i would like to see a lot more of your blog writing :)...keep smiling , be positive and keep blogging... :0)

Unknown said...

no one in the world is perfect...and this just says u need improvement...but it doesnt say you are not good...yoyu are definitely good on writing...vaise i hav just said wat u said to some extent but thats wat i feel...n keep blogging....

Anonymous said...

Congratulations!!! You are now a step closer to your goal. Hugs.. as always, I am there with you..

Samir said...

Agree with Nikhil on that one.. Unlike what u wrote,"It doesnt clearly say that I'm bad.", I feel it doesnt state anywhere at all that it's bad.. And realistically, I dont think any mentor/guide would ever go out of the way and give over the top feedback for one's first assignment.. Kinda preventing you from getting overconfident. :P. But ofcourse, improvements are possible no matter how good you are.. And as she wrote, Explore new fronts and new genres.

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